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"Title VII of the Civil Rights Act of 1964 makes it illegal for any employer to discrimminate against an individual on the basis of his/her religion. It is important for everyone of us to know the law and our legal rights concerning our beliefs."

1) "discrimminate" should be "discriminate" (with one "m")
2) "everyone" should be "every one"
 

References to "Satan" should be updated
I left them because it doesn't make sense to replace every instance of Satan with Zeus. Nobody has seen a Zeus Halloween costume or negative reference because it doesn't happen, so it would just be confusing and not make sense.

Thank you for making so many entries here, they are greatly appreciated! I try to implement them whenever I can.
 
I left them because it doesn't make sense to replace every instance of Satan with Zeus. Nobody has seen a Zeus Halloween costume or negative reference because it doesn't happen, so it would just be confusing and not make sense.
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This page has the said problem:

This paragraph although true in context, is inaccurate in the literal sense:
"The 1970's band "Black Sabbath," paved the way for heavy metal, death/black metal. The metal scene openly blasphemes the Christian "God" and Zevist lyrics are very popular, especially among the youth. This music is an expression of pent up rage. Look around you- Zevist music, movies, books, role playing games, video games, the internet with thousands of Zevist websites, Zevist t-shirts, Baphomet jewelry, and more. Zeus is becoming very popular. Zeus definitely has the youth, as Zeus reveals the truth. 'SATYA' in Sanskrit, one of the world's most ancient languages, means 'TRUTH.' The kids are fed up with being lied to."

I suggest changing to:
"The 1970's band Black Sabbath paved the way for heavy metal, death/black metal. The metal scene openly blasphemes the Christian "God", and Pagan themed lyrics are very popular, especially among the youth. This music is an expression of pent up rage. Look around you- Pagan music, movies, books, role playing games, video games, the internet with thousands of Pagan websites, Pagan t-shirts, jewelry inspired in the Ancient Pagan Gods, and more. Zeus and the Pagan Gods are becoming very popular. The Ancient Gods definitely have the youth, as Zeus reveals the truth, yet he is called "Satan" by the enemy. 'SATYA' in Sanskrit, one of the world's most ancient languages, means 'TRUTH.' The kids are fed up with being lied to."
 
This page has the said problem:

This paragraph although true in context, is inaccurate in the literal sense:
"The 1970's band "Black Sabbath," paved the way for heavy metal, death/black metal. The metal scene openly blasphemes the Christian "God" and Zevist lyrics are very popular, especially among the youth. This music is an expression of pent up rage. Look around you- Zevist music, movies, books, role playing games, video games, the internet with thousands of Zevist websites, Zevist t-shirts, Baphomet jewelry, and more. Zeus is becoming very popular. Zeus definitely has the youth, as Zeus reveals the truth. 'SATYA' in Sanskrit, one of the world's most ancient languages, means 'TRUTH.' The kids are fed up with being lied to."

I suggest changing to:
"The 1970's band Black Sabbath paved the way for heavy metal, death/black metal. The metal scene openly blasphemes the Christian "God", and Pagan themed lyrics are very popular, especially among the youth. This music is an expression of pent up rage. Look around you- Pagan music, movies, books, role playing games, video games, the internet with thousands of Pagan websites, Pagan t-shirts, jewelry inspired in the Ancient Pagan Gods, and more. Zeus and the Pagan Gods are becoming very popular. The Ancient Gods definitely have the youth, as Zeus reveals the truth, yet he is called "Satan" by the enemy. 'SATYA' in Sanskrit, one of the world's most ancient languages, means 'TRUTH.' The kids are fed up with being lied to."
All the Zevist terminology will be reverted to "Satan" and so on. As it is, this sermon would not make any sense to an outsider. These changes shouldn't have been made.
 
I left them because it doesn't make sense to replace every instance of Satan with Zeus. Nobody has seen a Zeus Halloween costume or negative reference because it doesn't happen, so it would just be confusing and not make sense.

Thank you for making so many entries here, they are greatly appreciated! I try to implement them whenever I can.
I see, makes sense. I should have read it more carefully.

I'm glad I can help by pointing these out, making the sites look professional is among our priorities, and fixing typos is one way to get there.
 
Hecate's and Khepuru's Rituals do not load on the duckduckgo version of ToZ Rituals.
You can use a link to get to them but you cannot click on them from the site in the browser itself.
 
Hecate's and Khepuru's Rituals do not load on the duckduckgo version of ToZ Rituals.
You can use a link to get to them but you cannot click on them from the site in the browser itself.
That is an issue on your end, it seems. If you provide more details, maybe we can help you out with troubleshooting the cause. You could try deleting browser cookies or try with a private browsing window/tab to see if the issue is linked to cookies.
 
Hecate's and Khepuru's Rituals do not load on the duckduckgo version of ToZ Rituals.
You can use a link to get to them but you cannot click on them from the site in the browser itself.
Did you try to open them from the old josrituals. org or from the new tozrituals. org?
 
That is an issue on your end, it seems. If you provide more details, maybe we can help you out with troubleshooting the cause. You could try deleting browser cookies or try with a private browsing window/tab to see if the issue is linked to cookies.
Oh its not a problem for me I just use a different browser, I assumed it was some kind of internal problem needing reporting but if its only on my end then it doesn't matter at all.
Thanks for the offer though.
 
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This should say 'graphic' instead.




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It says 'Eihwaz' on the section for Ehwaz.

Eihwaz is a separate rune
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"but is seen in what they manage to create and inovate with their people"

"inovate" should be "innovate"
 

"(which is a major lie, the entire issue has been discussed in the article Exposing the Mass Immigration Agenda)"

A URL would help readers find the article
 

"- Emanuel Macron"

"Emanuel" should be "Emmanuel" (two m's)
 

"There is a strange but yet revealing similarity between “asylum seekers” that have settled in Europe or North America in the millions in very strange circumstances and the existence of drugs and mafia gangs, toxic elements that should not exist in a civilized society but yet they are widespread and present in every corner of every street in most capitals and larger cities."

"but yet" should be "yet", in both cases
 

In DMs:

"Do not accept invites to non-JoS websites from new users. JoS does not have an official Discord / Telegram server. If something seems off, report the message."

1) "non-JoS" should be "non-ToZ"
2) "JoS" should be "ToZ"
 

"Although the corruption of the Church in his time more or less allowed for Boccaccio to act as he wished, the Church’s attitude to Boccaccio soured in the preceding centuries. In 1497, the lunatic zealot Savonarola included copies of Decameron in his “bonfire of the vanities” in Florence, condemning it as a morally corrupt book.

"preceding" should be "following" or succeeding".

Reason: the information after the sentence speaks of events in the future, not the past.
 

The image of the Shenu Ring is broken.
 

"Most notably, Cosimo de Medici who was the most influential lay person at the Council due to being the ruler of Florence met Plethon and attended certain lectures out of curiosity."

There should be a comma after "Medici" and "Florence"
 

Al Jilwah: Chapter IV

"It is my desire that all my followers unite in a bond of unity, lest those who are without prevail against them." - Shaitan

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