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JoS Websites Editorial Check Thread

https://templeofzeus.org/S_Resources

Link to DVD's does not work.
It also says "to advance beyond what is on the JoS website", but should be ToZ.

Can really recommend that DVD btw (Kundalini Yoga for Beginners & Beyond).
Went through it once yesterday and have been using it once a week the past 15 years or so.
 

"The serpent, a symbol of the Ancient Gods, represents the fiery kundalini force coiled at the base of the spine, which, upon ascending, transforms the human mind and soul to a higher level of understanding and ability. This is the true meaning of "Raising the Devil." The Serpent also represents the DNA helix of life."

"Serpent" is mentioned twice, but capitalised only once.
 

Some names must be updated:
  • [JG] -> [TG]
  • NakedPluto -> Alexandros Iowno
  • Maelstrom -> Maelstorm
Same goes for
 
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This should either say "If there are several planets in" or "If several planets are in".

Also, in the 5th sentence there should be a period after the word 'sensitive'.

found here:
 
https://race-truth.com/ and
Race-Mixing in the Hollywood

"the" should be removed
 

The most popular pornographic content depicting race-mixing most of the time consists of Black males and ahite females, exactly in the same way the same is being done in television, advertising, music, film industry etc.

"ahite" should be "White"
 

"of content to as many people as possible. As discussed in another article, social media has “simplified” and “dumped-down” the minds of most people."

"dumped-down" should be "dumbed-down"
 
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it should say
"we all know who really"

found here:
 
Not too much further down the page it says "Katty Perry" instead of Katy Perry

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If I find anymore I'll just make it all one post
 
Several times on the music page it says "gansta" instead of "gangsta" which I assume wasn't intentional, since the first time its spelled "gangsta"
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Found here:


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I think this should say
"What does porn have to do with race-mixing?"

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I believe it would be more grammatically correct to say:
"where people are no longer interested in meeting or establishing"

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I apologize if its intentionally written this way, since it occurs more than once.
I think it would be better to say:
"who are no longer interested in procreating"

Found here:

"dumped-down" should be "dumbed-down"
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Its the same for the pornography page.


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This should say "Jon (Stryker)'s" instead.

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This should be "or" instead of "of".

Found here:


I'm done for now, I'll come back later and if I find any more I'll post them.
 

Al Jilwah: Chapter IV

"It is my desire that all my followers unite in a bond of unity, lest those who are without prevail against them." - Shaitan

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