I wrote this poem for Azazel and i think it needs a little more work but i would like to know what you guys think of it so far.
Ode to Azazel
His justice is swift
his vengence mercilous
the great astral smith
the educator of us
crowned prince of hell
in his factual story
he can be found in Sippar
and also in Larsa
he goes by Babbar
though some call him Shemyaza
Hail to thee o' glorious one
Hail to thee a ruler of hell
Hail to thee Azazel
be gentle im the greatest poet.
Ode to Azazel
His justice is swift
his vengence mercilous
the great astral smith
the educator of us
crowned prince of hell
in his factual story
he can be found in Sippar
and also in Larsa
he goes by Babbar
though some call him Shemyaza
Hail to thee o' glorious one
Hail to thee a ruler of hell
Hail to thee Azazel
be gentle im the greatest poet.