Opinions on my satanic Newsletter (trust me this will work this time

[Jon madea]

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Sorry for doing this a third time but I received help in why it was not working and solved the problem. Again I would like your help in making this newsletter perfect by telling me what all of you think I should add, delete, or change. It is still rough like I said when it comes to grammer so please ignore that. Again thank you for taking the time to look at this and thank you Spencer for the helpful tips.

 

[metanoia04]

--- Can you send me a copy via email - I can't see any of the images etc. I do a lot of editing as part of my job so would be happy to help with suggestions/encouragement.