So,... long ago, I had written a story,and thought about working back at it, but I know a lot of knowledge has been brought into my mind in this present time than in the past. Let me know what you think truly, and if there should be any adjustments that should be properly made. I know there has...

I have a 17 year old sister who all of her life has been ridden with mental problems.....She's quite schizophrenic. Awhile back ago she had chopped off her hair, revealing a birthmark that somewhat resembles a set of numbers, it's quite difficult to read, but it does seem to look like either 666...