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Ayleth [NG]
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  • My muses,
    Why must I choose
    From love or desire's game?
    Where's the middle domain
    Where God meets the man?

    Where remembrance is sacred
    Against all I hold dear
    The messenger, both you and me
    The receiver, those who want to be free.

    The form of earth given spark
    Upon the fall of the dark stars
    Hourglass of the sublime
    Like Creation of time

    The struggle you need
    For the fifth door decreed
    Between the loud void and silent light
    *not AI generated
    MyMuses.png
    Goldenwings
    Goldenwings
    So good!

    It inspired me to write a text( not ai generated), i tried revising it with ai , it becomes sooo poetic but i prefer to keep original version:

    unable to fully open the eyes
    relaxed confusion and the angled sun
    nymphs laughs and the drums
    here i enter
    ⴰⵣⵓⵍ
    When the cave holds the Gold
    When beauty in the extremes
    When the mountain is so High
    There is no middle path
    Unable to open my eyes
    Does the star stave the earth
    I see myself from the other side
    When the mountain is so High
    There is no middle man
    I let my heart choose
    Turning my back to the nymphs
    The music is clear and the senses zre sharp
    My berber horse has a short back
    The intellect and the genitals dont co-mount
    Funny that by letting them go you they make other man's life pale
    the cave intensifies the taste
    Waiting for someone to blossom your flower
    Happy watching the birds come and go , feeling important
    Misleading beauty
    discovering the bird only needed somewhere to stand
    Makes the princess identity crumble
    My eyes are a cup of tea
    You arent special everyone here is glowing
    For man knows his self by the horse he ride
    Like thought like mind like the land
    To love the peak is to love the ugly path to it
    Not about beauty yet everything is beautiful
    The cute cat says the mouse is ugly yet taste so good
    All a family yet we live on each other
    For there is no middle path,
    Didn't i just explained that you are not special?
    How can it come into existence if it isnt holy?
    My eyes can't fully open
    I close them to see better
    Upside down i clearly see why you are special
    My eyes cant fully open
    My vision is from the other side
    The problem and solution arise from the same field
    Let me explain to you kid what i know from experience
    Sacrifice lays in whats rational
    For the donkey kicks its owner
    the saddle of the brain is slippery
    The horse isn't angling his back
    The mountain is so high
    Dont hold unto it and walk sovereign
    Or mount bareback
    For the back of the horses is smoother than you think
    The safety of the goal is in the cliff
    Through sweat you feel his efforts
    Experiencing intimacy in a different way
    focusing on the cat to not see the berber lion
    the same gladiator fought in rome
    worrying about the berber lion
    yet yearning for his encounter when he went extint
    When the peak of the mountain is so high
    Every step is holy
    Rise the arrow pointing to the sky
    Since no one here is worthy of your dominion
    The ultimate perfection is embracing the imperfection
    Oh you Aquarian Spirit bright,
    The spark, the genius, shining light,
    My love toward you must be divine,
    Eros flows as blueprint of each sign.

    Sappho stands as our muse and guide,
    Her flowing verses where hearts reside.
    A sacred spark was given to me,
    To tend with care and set it free

    To all the people, the searching eyes,
    The wonder that in their spirit lies,
    No more tears you divine being
    Your home awaits, light guides your seeing.

    For Queen Mother Herself had said
    Truth eternal, wisdom widespread:
    "Light is Power", flows through your being.
    Guided by Zefs, forever freeing.
    * AI alternated, used to give stanza flow
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    Umun
    Umun
    I understand you're a visual artist but if this is your writing than by all means you should pursue this as well.

    This and the previous ones were quite enjoyable. Thank you
    Ayleth [NG]
    Ayleth [NG]
    @Umun Unfortunately not, thank you for the encouragement though 💛
    My original (this one below) is not as rythmic and it does not respect the lyrical rules as much as I want it to. I do get 3-4 phrases out of nowhere that rhyme and sometimes I like to construct small poems based on them and feelings. Proper ones are hard, I tell you that!


    Oh you Aquarian Spirit,
    The spark, the genius, the created of the being
    My love towards you must be divine,
    For I feel God Eros in the blueprint of every sign.

    Sappho is my muse, my teacher and adagio,
    Whose eternal poetry breathes through living form.
    And this small spark was given to me
    To tender, to make it glow.

    To the people, the eyes,
    The wonder that still partains their being.
    No more tears, you, divine being.
    Your home awaits, lightens your seeing.

    For Queen Mother Herself said
    "Light is Power"
    So is your being.

    Guided by Zefs.
    Seen by unseen.
    This time I tried to be focused on oil painting aesthetic and how AI can achieve that. Different subtle style of each artist cannot be replicated.
    Zeus.jpg

    Zeus-.jpg


    Zeus-other-version.jpg
    The muse of day,
    The muse of night,
    You shall be what within ever resides.

    With your dance of the seasons,
    May I be blessed with wisdom.
    So that I can create with both minds and hearts,
    For this pleasure, delight and fire
    Will always be a reason to inspire.

    A step, a clue or an ordain.
    I can leave it in the world without vain.
    *not AI generated
    Muses.png
    Eos with your rays of knowledge
    Bring forth the wise and the just.
    In your light, we seek to flourish,
    As shadows fade, we place our trust.

    Darkness no more, it was said from above.
    As humans, we struggle, cry, fight, seek and grow
    For touched by your grace, we learn from mistakes,
    Simply obstacles not mirage.

    Truly blessed is the being close to you,
    Queen of the Dawn!
    *AI alternated, used to give stanza flow
    EE-1-1.jpg
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Al Jilwah: Chapter IV

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