JoS Websites Editorial Check Thread

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Extra.html

“Those who are without go (at?) it alone and their lives usually end in disaster.”

-I feel like this sentence is incomplete, I suggest adding “at” in there to make it better. Or its supposed to be "do it alone" but the distance between the "d" and "g" keys is far enough for me to think something was just missed, instead of a spelling error.

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“Secret, Don't Tell; The Encyclopedia of Hypnotism, by Carla Emery, 1997”

-Anyone really can find the book, regardless of this, but it was published in 1998 not 97. I don't know if there is any legal nonsense that can be brought up if the JoS doesn't provide the correct reference, just in case I guess.

Go it alone is colloquial, its an expression.

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/go-it-alone

Oh wow, that's embarrassing :lol: , I had never heard of it and it sounded so weird to me. Thank you!

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Why-is-there-suffering.html

deader than a doornail.

-Im not sure here whether or not "deader" should be capitalized or the full stop before it should be a coma, but i dont think it's right.

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through this, they direct the energies into slave labor for Gentiles and of course, their own wealth and riches.

-"Through" should be capitalized.

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The endless list goes on and one.

-Should be "on and on".

 

[Korpi]

Within Demons C - F
The link to Abraxas's Hieratic Information is broken: For More Advanced Information About Abraxas Click Here.
Working link: https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/ABRASAXHC.html

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Brotherhood.html

"Satan created the Brotherhood of the Snake for humans to be able to advance to higher levels of spirituality.3"

-Should be “ ³ ” instead of a normal “3”. Also the references at the end are only numbered up to 2, “ ³ ” should be added to the last one, IF that is where this information comes from, can’t verify it right now.

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Why-is-there-suffering.html

- On this page there is a seemingly unrelated link at the very bottom that's not even clickable(not embedded) and the home page button doesn't work.

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Christian-Greed.html

"They are labeled as being "evil," told they will "burn in Hell," told they are "wrong," "lost," and continually face extreme and fierce opposition, along with Christian Psychic Attack.

-"Christian Psychic Attack" is an embedded link here but it doesn't lead to the page called "Christian Psychic Attack"- https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/XtianPsychicAttack.html instead it leads to https://satanslibrary.org/ExposingChristianity/YHVH.html "YHVH: The Truth About "Yaweh" "Jehova" Taking the Mask Off of Christianity".

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Preparing_for_Meditation.html

"BA CK TO MAIN POWER MEDITATION PAGE"

-The "BACK TO MAIN POWER MEDITATION PAGE" link at the end of the page has a typo in it.

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Damned_Christians.html

"Their reign was during the "Dark Ages[?]" To find out if something is good or evil, all one has to do is give it power."

-Missing period where the [?] is.

 

[OuroborphicMystery]

This has been bugging me for years.

The page for the Runes has been updated since I had this concern, but this part still hasn't changed. So maybe I am wrong, but I need to see for sure. On the section for Uruz, it says the following:

Magick: transfer of energies, used for projecting or drawing in of energy. Repeated use of the rune will gradually increase the amounts of energy one can handle at any given time. Helps in the growth of one’s own reserves of power. When using Fa with another rune, it works to increase the power of any rune it is used with for good or ill. Adepts can combine the forces of Fa with the forces of Isa (fire and ice), but this could prove disastrous for the uninitiated. Green and shimmering gold work well with the energies of this rune.

But as you can see, Fa and fire is mentioned extensively throughout the description. So this has always felt like this section actually belongs under Fehu, not Uruz. The only part that gives me doubt is the colors used with the rune. But either way, I feel like this is at least worth mentioning.

 

[OuroborphicMystery]

This has been bugging me for years.

The page for the Runes has been updated since I had this concern, but this part still hasn't changed. So maybe I am wrong, but I need to see for sure. On the section for Uruz, it says the following:

Magick: transfer of energies, used for projecting or drawing in of energy. Repeated use of the rune will gradually increase the amounts of energy one can handle at any given time. Helps in the growth of one’s own reserves of power. When using Fa with another rune, it works to increase the power of any rune it is used with for good or ill. Adepts can combine the forces of Fa with the forces of Isa (fire and ice), but this could prove disastrous for the uninitiated. Green and shimmering gold work well with the energies of this rune.

But as you can see, Fa and fire is mentioned extensively throughout the description. So this has always felt like this section actually belongs under Fehu, not Uruz. The only part that gives me doubt is the colors used with the rune. But either way, I feel like this is at least worth mentioning.

Also, I was checking the page just now and under Sowilo, it says "[...]Kundalini is like lightening and flashes in the brain when it connects with the 6th chakra.[...]

It's supposed to be lightning, not lightening.

Sorry for the double post, I'm just noticing this now.

 

[OuroborphicMystery]

Okay, oh my Gods, I'm really sorry for triple-posting but I felt like going all-in on the Runes page since I started already.

On the section for Ehwaz (#19, not Eihwaz), the last sentence says "Eihwaz unites the energies harmoniously." The letter i must be a typo, because the two runes aren't really related and it's Ehwaz that deals with unity, not Eihwaz. This could possibly lead the way to confusion.

Mannaz (#20) ends with "Amethyst". No periods, no other words, no nothing. I am pretty sure some years ago, it said something like "Amethyst is the gem used with this rune." and somehow, this got left out. I checked archive.org and it doesn't go back any further than 2020 anymore, and the problem is seemingly present even then.

That's all I've noticed. Good day.

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Helloween.html

-The sermon title and link leading to this page have "Halloween" misspelled as "Helloween".

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"Infernalism: The Left Hand Path of Screams," by White Wolf was one of the worst fabricated diatribes on Satanism I have ever seen."

-I don't know if this is intentional or not but the book title is "Infernalism: The Path of Screams" without “Left Hand”.

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"As for year round, the kiddies shouldn't be left out on the fun."

-I believe it should be "of".

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"The [?]INRI" at the top of the cross can snap on and off, providing a variety:"

-Missing an opening set of quotations where the [?] is.

 

[tabby]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Black_Mirror.html

In the instructions for the Black Mirror it says:

ending with the energy stored in your solar chakra.

But then it goes on to say:

Now, take the energy stored in your heart chakra and release it into the mirror by exhaling it

But from what I'm seeing it doesn't say anywhere beforehand about energy being stored in the heart chakra. It only talks about the third eye and solar chakra.

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://satanslibrary.org/ExposingChristianity/Watchtower.html

"from the book "The Time is at Hand[?]; 1889"

-Missing quotations where the [?] is.

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"That time is near. How hear?...No man knows the date but we know it will be very soon."

-I believe it should be "how near" based on the context.

 

[Masterj810610]

French Astarte Ritual https://joyofsatan.fr/satanslibrary.org/Astarte_Power_Ritual.html

A, ASTR, NNA,ASTAR, ASTARTE, ASTAR, NNA, ASTR, A should be A, NNA, ASTR, ASTAR, ASTARTE, ASTAR, ASTR, NNA, A

French Azazel Ritual https://joyofsatan.fr/satanslibrary.org/Azazel_Power_Ritual.html

when its time to vibrate APOLLON, there is a SATANAS written in between the words vibrate and 10 times.

The link to the french version of the RTR are not the good one in many RTR pages. When we click on «back to the RTR list» at the end of most of the RTRs, the link is written https://joyofsatan.fr/satanslibrary.org/Rtrs/RTR_English.html but it should be https://joyofsatan.fr/satanslibrary.org/Rtrs/RTR_French.html

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Thinking-for-Yourself.html

"Satan and his Demons have been trying to get through to humanity for centuries. Is that everything is backwards. We save our own souls by thinking for ourselves. Everything *is* backwards spiritually, as nearly all of the original spiritual teachings have been corrupted. Christianity, Islam, the Holy Bible and related are constantly being touted as “good” “the word of God” “the truth” and so forth."

-This sentence seems super out of place, it doesn't make sense to me. I have included the previous sentence and the following ones for context, but I just feel like it's either incomplete or doesn't belong at all.

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Spirit-Abuse.html

- Near the end of the page, there is this link Libellus Magicus that leads to this page https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Evil_Jehova.html, at the end of it there are 3 links that lead to a website that doesn't appear to exist anymore, though they can still be accessed through the web archive manually.

- At the end of the page there is a link that is not embedded and cannot be clicked
" https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/SATANIC.html "

- The home page button at the bottom of the page also doesn't work.

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Exorcism_of_Emily_Rose.html

"In closing, the Demons were bound for centuries. Anneliese Michel (the real name of “Emily Rose”[?] was supposedly “possessed” in 1968. I can reassure you the Demons including Belial were bound and it was not until very recently were they released."

-Missing end brackets where the [?] is.

 

[Masterj810610]

French Astarte ritual https://joyofsatan.fr/satanslibrary.org/Astarte_Power_Ritual.html

The sentence
[Après avoir répété 10 fois ceci, affirmez une fois :] shouldn't be there, it should be Après avoir répété 3 fois chacun des 10 mots mots précédents, affirmez une fois : instead.

 

[Lightning-Wings]

This link in the Exposing Islam PDF from HPS Maxine's Sermons (webpage), is broken: https://666moon.webs.com/index.htm

Found it is not working even through Web Archive. What should I use as a substitute for the translation I'm working on?
The main JoS website?

Thanks!

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/DEMONSI.html/index.html

"Mulciber is Beelzebub's second in command[.] He is the architect and engineer of the city known as Pandemonium."

-Missing period where the "[.]" is.

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"ALASTOR
[???] Executor of Decrees Handed Down by Satan's Court"

-I feel like this is a description of his rank, if that is the case, it should be consistent with the rest of the God descriptions and have "Rank:" before it; "Rank: Executor of Decrees Handed Down by Satan's Court"

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"Nergal is one of the 7 sons of Satan and is the ruler of the Underworld. His wife is Erishkegal. He has power over the dead."

-Her name is "Ereshkigal", the "e" and "i" are transposed.

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"He possesses the art of prediction and is an adept at interacting with the dead[.]"

-Missing period where the "[.]" is.

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"Sargatanas has beautiful golden wings and wore a red robe dusted with gold. He has long blonde hair and light blue eyes and fair skin. He was very quiet[.]"

-Missing period where the "[.]" is.

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"His subordinate Demons are: Bathin, and Eligos[.]"

-Missing period where the "[.]" is.

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"He is one of the 7 sons of Satan. BR>He has a dark complexion and jet-black hair."

-I think this is a broken “Line Break Element”.

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He rules the center of magnetism and the factor of life for all, along with photogenes and solar power of all kinds.

- I feel like this is supposed to be "photogenesis" but I am not 100% certain.

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MORAX
Morax is also known as Foraii, Forfax, Marax and is the Egyptian Goddess "Maat".

Zodiac Position: 10-14 degrees of Cancer *[20-29 Libra]
July 2nd-7th *[Oct 13-22]
Tarot Card: 3 of Cups *[4 Swords]
Planets: Mars/Pluto
Metals: Iron/Plutonium
Element: Water *[Air]
Candle color: Red
Elder
Rank: Earl/President
Marax is a Day Demon and rules 30 legions of spirits

- "Elder" is present in Her description, and I just don't understand why its there or what its supposed to mean. Its not Her rank, sooo?

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Lastly, most God descriptions (the very first sentence where most of them go “is also known as”) are missing a period. I say most, because there are a few that do have a period at the end, so either a period should be added to all that are missing or the existing ones (like on Lady Maat’s section for example) should be removed.

 

[Power of Justice [JG]]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/DEMONIV.html/index.html

“Agares rules over the common people; they are the voice of the common people and residence of Hell.”

-This sentence doesn't make sense to me. I think this is supposed to be “she is the voice of the common people and residents of Hell.”

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“He Gives true answers to questions, answers questions of things unknown, makes men witty, and teaches cunning and shrewdness. “

-I dont see why “Gives” is capitalized here.

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“He answers questions regarding private matters[.]”

-Missing period where the "[.]" is.

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“He provides good familiars, and teaches astronomy and the liberal sciences, He can be sent to revenge secret enemies.”

-This comma should be changed to a period.

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“He can be sent to revenge secret enemies”

-This sentence isn’t correct and is missing something. Some suggestions would be : “He can be sent to (exact/get?) revenge (on?) secret enemies”

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“He teaches astronomy, geometry, and everything concerned with measurement. He also teaches mathematics[.]”

-Missing period where the "[.]" is.

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“Element of earth*”

-”Earth” should be capitalized to be consistent with the rest of the page.

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“Andras Satan's Chief Guard and Head of Security*”

-I think something is missing here. I think it should be : "Andras [is?] Satan's Chief Guard and Head of Security"

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“He is said to be very dangerous[.]”

-Missing period where the "[.]" is.

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“Animal: Hell Hound/Wolf*>”

-I think this is a broken “Line Break Element”.

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“Element of: Fire and Air”

-Usually when more than one element is listed there is never a colon. It should be removed to stay consistent with the rest of the page.

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“Andromalius rules over 36 legions of spirits and is a night Demon”

-”Night” should be capitalized to be consistent with the rest of the page.

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“He will punish thieves and avenge offenders.”

-I think one is supposed to avenge victims not offenders, so to me this sentence doesn't make sense. I also wouldn’t write it in future tense.

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“Asmodeus carries the title "King of the Demons"
Asmodeus must be invoked bareheaded.
Asmodeus was of the order of Seraphim and he carries the title "King of the Demons." He governs the many realms of pleasure. He prefers to be summoned bareheaded [without a hat or head covering] and he teaches the arts of astronomy, arithmetic, geomancy, and craftsmanship.”

-There is no inherent mistake here, it's just that the same two things are repeated in 4 different sentences back to back, it's very repetitive and may not be intended.

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“Barbatos is a day Demon and he governs 30 legions of spirits and is of the Order of Virtues”

-”Day” should be capitalized to be consistent with the rest of the page.

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“Barbatos is a very handsome god.”

-”God” should be capitalized to be consistent with the rest of the page.

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“BATHIN, aka BATHYM, MARTHIM **Bathin is the Egyptian goddess Nephthys”

-”Goddess” should be capitalized to be consistent with the rest of the page.

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“He reconciles friends and enemies, and provides familiars[.] He can assist one with job promotions and helps to gain a higher position.”

-Missing period where the "[.]" is.

 

[Astralnaut]

There are some errors that are going to be difficult to catch if you have to compare them side by side, say for example the website, and a downloadable pdf. The Devil Keys pdf is missing the last 2 words(ah-PEE-lah Goh-hud) of the 2nd Enochian Key, but on the website it is perfectly fine. This is not something I would have figured out if I had not already said the keys enough times to know that something was off when I was chanting it in Enochian. I don't think anyone actually wants the job of doing this very tedious side by side comparison. I'm assuming that mageson had something to do with this considering the numbers involved. 2 and 2 and kikestein being a jew, or at least jew manipulated.

 

[Astralnaut]

The pdf for RTR's everyday is missing the communications rtr in the table of contents. It is on page 13, but you would have to scroll down and look for it instead of just looking it up through the table of contents.

 

[tabby]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Satanic_Sermons.html

Second to last link: "Satan's Library - Free PDFs, Audio Sermons, and links to YouTube Semons"

'semons' should be sermons.

 

[tabby]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/AllDemons.html

Demonology Section: How To Summon Demongs / Gods Of Hell

Typo on "Demons".

 

[Egon]

https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Brain.html

"Humanity has been denied access to psychic powers through generations and the lack of use and has all but lost."

 

[Korpi]

Abraxas: Hieratic Information

Under "Symbols of Abraxas", all three images fail to load.
Image 1, Image 2 and Image 3.

Not Found

The requested URL was not found on this server.

Additionally, a 404 Not Found error was encountered while trying to use an ErrorDocument to handle the request.

 

[AFODO]

Azazel psalm and honorary/invocation wont load:
https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/AzazelHC.html

Not Found

The requested URL was not found on this server.

Additionally, a 404 Not Found error was encountered while trying to use an ErrorDocument to handle the request.

 

[Henu the Great]

Azazel psalm and honorary/invocation wont load:

Psalms will be released later.

 

[Henu the Great]

...

Hey, did you receive my e-mail regarding updating a link?

 

[AFODO]

Yahoo groups archive link not working:
https://www.satanisgod.org/


This is a PDF but I will post it here anyways
https://satanslibrary.org/English/H..._Part_4_12_-_High_Priest_Hooded_Cobra_666.pdf

Whether people like it or not, or remember it or not, they do possess an astral body.The biggest joke the enemy has pushed on people, is the fact that there is"chance", "You only live once" and that everything is "coincidental". For anycoincidence to happen, there have to be interacting forces, however. And for thereto be forces, someone has to guide these forces. This is how "Karma" works.

Not all humans do possess an astral body, and one part of this body is actually the"Female" part, or on a lower level, the female mind.

Next up, doesn't it sounds strange?
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/SATANIC.html

NO! Satanic rituals are real and binding. The ritual should only be done ONE TIME!

Binding? If I put it in a translator it says "mandatory" what does "Binding" wants to actually represent here?
Shouldn't it be "...are real and powerful..." ?

 

[Aesc666]

NO! Satanic rituals are real and binding. The ritual should only be done ONE TIME!

Binding? If I put it in a translator it says "mandatory" what does "Binding" wants to actually represent here?
Shouldn't it be "...are real and powerful..." ?

In this context, it's more similar to "legally binding", except obviously not in the "legal" sense. More like a "permanent commitment" that creates an unbreakable bond. A commitment that we are to uphold, no matter what.

adjective: binding
(of an agreement or promise) involving an obligation that cannot be broken.
"business agreements are intended to be legally binding"

 

[Henu the Great]

Binding? If I put it in a translator it says "mandatory" what does "Binding" wants to actually represent here?
Shouldn't it be "...are real and powerful..." ?

Binding, as in permanent or bound, for example.

I suggest that you also use online dictionaries along with translation tools so that you can learn more and faster.

 

[AFODO]

Binding? If I put it in a translator it says "mandatory" what does "Binding" wants to actually represent here?
Shouldn't it be "...are real and powerful..." ?

Binding, as in permanent or bound, for example.

I suggest that you also use online dictionaries along with translation tools so that you can learn more and faster.

Thank you.
Now I understand, but I can't find the same meaning for it in a dictionary, the problem is the text environment changes its meaning and in these cases its hard to find it in dictionaries, and translators are stupid.

Maybe Grammarly would be smart enough but it doesn't have a dictionary or translator feature as I know
Anyways could you recommend a dictionary, or you don't know any good?

 

[Henu the Great]

Now I understand, but I can't find the same meaning for it in a dictionary, the problem is the text environment changes its meaning and in these cases its hard to find it in dictionaries, and translators are stupid.

To better understand a foreign language you need to use it as much as possible in as many different contexts as possible. Not only that but any new word can be found in dictionaries, making learning easier.

Maybe Grammarly would be smart enough but it doesn't have a dictionary or translator feature as I know

Technically Grammarly does include a dictionary, otherwise it would not work as intended. While it does not offer translation and manually seeking definitions for words, it can be used together with other tools. Furthermore, Grammarly is not the only tool available and I recommend looking further into the subject.

Anyways could you recommend a dictionary, or you don't know any good?

For example https://www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/

And many more to choose from: https://www.qwant.com/?q=online+dictionary&client=opensearch&t=web

 

[AFODO]

Thank you. I think the forums, and reading JoS material is helping a lot.

 

[Henu the Great]

Thank you. I think the forums, and reading JoS material is helping a lot.

Yes. Generally, the more you go out of your comfort zone the more growth happens as a result.

 

[Username]

Satanic Symbols

Lucifer, Lucifer, stretch your tail, and lead me away full speed through the strait passage, of the valley of death, to the shining light, the palace of of the Gods -Isanatha Muni

I believe that there should be a single 'of' instead of double 'of.' I may be wrong here.

https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Satanic_Symbols.html
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Kids and Teens for Satan

Satan never lied to anyone Satan accepts you as you are, and does not hate human nature Satan rules over what is called 'the occult' which is completely spiritual Satan gives us knowledge and does not fear human spiritual advancement Satan does not fear humanity Christianity is not a religion; it is a program to stop people from knowing about and using the powers of their minds and souls known as �witchcraft.� Satan has been treated horribly by those who hate him for no good reason and who also hate humanity and try to enslave us.

There are missing full stops and there should be double inverted commas.

Unlike the Christian �God,�Satan doesn't push himself on anyone and we all come to him of our own free will.
There should be double inverted commas.

Satan�s Blessings to you and best wishes when you explore and learn.
There should be a single inverted comma.

This Group is for 13- 19 year olds who wish to learn in a friendly environment free from xian harrassment.
The spelling should be harassment instead of harrassment.

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Kids.html
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Joy Of Satan E-Groups

We do not charge any 'membership dues' nor do we charge for any knowlege.
The spelling should be knowledge instead of knowlege.

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Groups.html
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Spiritual Satanism for New People

We are working on revising these, but most of the information is self-explanitory.
The spelling should be self-explanatory instead of self-explanitory.

To commmunicate with Satan and his Demons, we do this telepathically.
The spelling should be communicate instead of commmunicate.

Many brothers and sisters in Satan in the groups are knowledgable in these matters.
The spelling should be knowledgeable instead of knowledgable.

Through learning and empowering oursleves, anxieties and fears are banished and we become strong in wisdom and knowledge.
The spelling should be ourselves instead of oursleves.

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/4Newbies.html
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Three Steps of Witchcraft

To invoke energy form an external source, you can do this when you have enough experience by focusing upon what you ant to draw energy form and “breathing” in the energy from it.
The spelling should be want instead of ant.

To invoke energy form an external source, you can do this when you have enough experience by focusing upon what you ant to draw energy form and “breathing” in the energy from it.
The spelling for both the words should be from instead of form.

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/ThreeSteps.html
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Ritual Tools

A separate bowl is not necessary, but can be used to burn poppets,, personal belongings or effigies of a hated one for use in destructive [black] magickal workings.
There should be a single comma instead of double commas.

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/RITUALITEMS.html
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Standard Ritual to Satan

For black magick spells, use red (anger) or navy blue (blue or black) Dark brown works well, also.
There is a lack of a full stop.

For kids and teens who are unable to obtain any ritual items and for those who are financially underprivilaged(), the ritual can be performed in Your own private Astral Temple
The 'Y' in 'Your' should be small and there should be a full stop at the end.

Vibration is essential to working spells and such, empowering our souls and advancing oursleves spiritually.
The spelling should be ourselves instead of oursleves.

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Ritual.html
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The Yezidi Devil Worshippers of Iraq

Eridu also known as "Enkidu" was an ancient city in Southern Iraq.
I believe that there are missing commas here.

In 1892, Farik "Omar Pasa invited several Yezidi Chiefs to Mosul.
I believe that there should be a single inverted comma instead of a double inverted comma.

" Melek means "King."
Maybe there is an extra space here.

The Yezidis not only acknowledge the loss of many copies of their scriptures but also Shaikh Hayder"s recording of the Book of Resh.
There may be a single inverted comma instead of a double inverted comma.

The latter no doubt the Resh scripture was set down from memory.
There may be missing commas here.

The Mishaf [Scripture] Resh [Black] the Yezidis believe was written by Shaikh Hasan al-Basri has been called "Black" because the word Satan is covered in it.
This sentence may not be grammatically correct.

In the single mention of Qu"ret Al Yezid in this webpage, I believe that there should be single quotation marks instead of double quotation marks as in the webpage THE QU'RET AL-YEZID.

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/QuretAlYezid.html

Also, I ask that all double inverted commas in all the mentions of the name Melek Ta"us be checked.

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Yezidis.html

 

[Bipolar Bear]

Not sure if this was already posted, but in Al Jilwah, near the end: Do not give them your books, lest th(e)y alter them without your knowledge. I am certain it should be "they" and not "thy".