A Traveler into the Virtues (can you help me?)

[Virael_]

I had an idea for a short story in mind.

Let me preface this by saying that I am fascinated by mystical and allegorical tales, and that one of my ambitions is to write one.

I'd like to literally write a Satanic Bible complete with numerical and allegorical meanings, similar to the Enemy's Bible, but with the difference that it will not be a total curse on mankind, but a sort of cycle of improvement.

For the time being, I have a basic idea for a shorter story. The idea is that of this protagonist symbolising the reader (SS) going on a journey through the Satanic Virtues. I haven't written anything yet, but the first lines would be something like this:
"In the Beginning Satan gave us Freedom..."

I want to write the text in ancient Greek, I'm still learning some, so any advice on words that might be useful to me are welcome.
For the time being I will write it in Italian and translate it into English.

In my style in general, I take concepts that I think are beautiful and try to include them in the story by creating a story around them. An example might be the concept of the Gate of Heaven, or the scene of a God opening his wings and flying, or something similar. Again, new ideas for visually beautiful but meaningful concepts are welcome.
Obviously I use several of this kind of concepts in a story.

Can you help me in some ways?

 

[AFODO]

Can you help me in some ways?

Instead of creating myths or some sort of spiritual book, you should read such first. Learn about all the spiritual allegories more, than you will be more able to create one.

They say that people learn the most from comprehensible input. This is probably what they mean by "listening" or "silence" too.

 

[Hellenic SS]

I am fluent in Greek and I am moderate in Ancient Greek. I can help with translations.

 

[Virael_]

Instead of creating myths or some sort of spiritual book, you should read such first. Learn about all the spiritual allegories more, than you will be more able to create one.

They say that people learn the most from comprehensible input. This is probably what they mean by "listening" or "silence" too.

Much of this also helps me to understand and order what I already know. I am aware that it won't be 100 per cent perfect or anything like that.

 

[Virael_]

I wrote the first part:

"In the beginning Satan created man in his own image and likeness, and gave him life.

All the Gods and Goddesses brought him gifts, which would build up his soul so that he could receive Satan's final gift.

Satan gave man a Serpent, who was himself, and then said to man:
"Create my temple through the gifts of the Gods, exalt me to the highest heaven, and when you die you will be like me".

And with Satan's final gift, a great mountain was created, and to climb it would be the most difficult work for man, nothing could be more difficult than this work for a man.
But now this had become his great goal.

Thoth son of Satan finally breathed into man's soul, giving him breath, and he became alive.

Man set out on his journey and went to populate the Earth."

 

[Hellenic SS]

I wrote the first part:

"In the beginning Satan created man in his own image and likeness, and gave him life.

All the Gods and Goddesses brought him gifts, which would build up his soul so that he could receive Satan's final gift.

Satan gave man a Serpent, who was himself, and then said to man:
"Create my temple through the gifts of the Gods, exalt me to the highest heaven, and when you die you will be like me".

And with Satan's final gift, a great mountain was created, and to climb it would be the most difficult work for man, nothing could be more difficult than this work for a man.
But now this had become his great goal.

Thoth son of Satan finally breathed into man's soul, giving him breath, and he became alive.

Man set out on his journey and went to populate the Earth."

Awesome so far. It seems official, as if it were written in the JoS 20 years ago.